Lonely
Alone in a desolate world
I walked through lonely roads and saw
A pretty lass crying
Whispering her lovers name, calling him back
He is no where to be found…
I ensconced near her
“I attended his wedding today” she murmured and sighed
I gave her a hug
and walked again…
Saw an old man couched
I sat near him …he rumbled
“Searching the star my son today is,
he left me alone, alone in this lonely world”
“I buried him today”
I couldn’t stop my tears
Made a short prayer and left
Walked through those lonely roads, those lonely roads once again…
I met a young lad
shouting and cursing.
I stopped and looked at him
What’s wrong?
“She ditched me, left me for someone else”
You will find someone better
“I want no one else”
Keep the faith I said and walked
I walk through those lonely roads again and wonder
Where has smile disappeared?
Where have promises vanished?
Why has truth disappeared?
Where has love evanished?
With so many people around,
Why are we sad and solitary…
posted by pooza @ 7:39 PM
55 Comments:
At 11:13 PM, June 09, 2005,
Laymiro said…
Lovely :)
At 11:15 PM, June 09, 2005,
Laymiro said…
Oyee.. dare not say Thanks again now for this :P lol heheh
At 11:23 PM, June 09, 2005,
pooza said…
:D :D
Thanks you :P
Take care
At 11:24 PM, June 09, 2005,
Laymiro said…
Tum nahi sudhrogi :P
At 2:42 PM, June 10, 2005,
Anonymous said…
Hi Pooza,
Must say a superb poem.
At 3:04 PM, June 10, 2005,
pooza said…
Hi rahul
Thank you :)
take care
At 9:19 PM, June 10, 2005,
Anonymous said…
Hi Pooza,
Simply Heartfelt!
Regards,
Shirish
At 11:11 PM, June 10, 2005,
pooza said…
Hi Shirish :)
After a long time :)
Thanks :)
Take care
At 5:40 PM, June 11, 2005,
pooza said…
Hi krishna :)
:D :D
At 7:14 PM, June 11, 2005,
Anonymous said…
hi pooja thanx for visiting moi bloggie...lovely blog..loved the background music...hope 2 c u often..bye ..take care..pinks
At 9:11 PM, June 11, 2005,
pooza said…
hi pinks :)
thanks :)
take care
At 10:12 PM, June 12, 2005,
pooza said…
Hi Pinkcy
Thank you so much :)
Take care
At 12:05 PM, June 13, 2005,
Anonymous said…
too good.
u continuing the good work.
visited ur blog after a long time...all the stories,poems,articles are simply fabulous....can't wait for more work from u...
KUSH
At 2:10 PM, June 13, 2005,
pooza said…
Hi Kush
Thank You :)
Take care
At 11:58 PM, June 13, 2005,
Anonymous said…
hey...loved ur posts..specially sameer and shania wala..
-sonali(http://titzbitz.rediffblogs.com)
At 11:59 PM, June 13, 2005,
Anonymous said…
n if u really wanna thank me too...just drop a hii at my blogspace;)-sonali
At 12:31 AM, June 14, 2005,
pooza said…
Hi sonali
I drop a hit at ur blog space so many times .. I am blog rolling u :)
thanks
take care
At 12:31 AM, June 14, 2005,
pooza said…
Hi sonali
I drop a hit at ur blog space so many times .. I am blog rolling u :)
thanks
take care
At 2:00 PM, June 15, 2005,
radiohead said…
hi pooza. u have been tagged by me. If u havent been before, then its by me. And the format goes like this :
1.THREE NAMES YOU GO BY:
2.THREE SCREEN NAMES YOU HAVE HAD:
3.THREE PHYSICAL THINGS YOU LIKE ABOUT YOURSELF:
4.THREE PHYSICAL THINGS YOU DON'T LIKE ABOUT YOURSELF:
5.THREE PARTS OF YOUR HERITAGE :
6.THREE THINGS THAT SCARE YOU:
7.THREE OF YOUR EVERYDAY ESSENTIALS:
8.THREE THINGS YOU ARE WEARING RIGHT NOW:
9.THREE THINGS YOU WANT IN A RELATIONSHIP:
10.TWO TRUTHS AND A LIE (in no particular order):
11.THREE PHYSICAL THINGS ABOUT THE OPPOSITE SEX THAT APPEAL TO YOU:
12.THREE THINGS YOU WANT TO DO REALLY BADLY RIGHT NOW:
13.THREE CAREERS YOU'RE CONSIDERING:
14.THREE PLACES YOU WANT TO GO ON VACATION:
15.THREE KIDS NAMES YOU LIKE:
16.THREE THINGS YOU WANT TO DO BEFORE YOU DIE:
17.THREE PEOPLE WHO HAVE TO TAKE THIS QUIZ NOW:
See thats the format. Theres nothing personal. What u have to do is pt these in a post . May be u might have read somebodies blog regarding this. Actually nobody has tagged me till now so in the last ques. put my name :P .
May be through this i will know u better.
At 2:42 PM, June 15, 2005,
pooza said…
Hi Anuj :)
sure :)
Will do that ASAP :)
take care
At 6:55 PM, June 15, 2005,
Another one said…
Pretty very pretty ..
At 8:33 PM, June 15, 2005,
pooza said…
hi kapil
thanks :)
take care
At 10:12 AM, June 17, 2005,
pooza said…
Hi saurabh
Thank you
Take care :)
At 8:31 AM, June 20, 2005,
Anonymous said…
Hi There!!
I just visited a site I had set up for my 4 year old grand daughter, but my hubby already has one, so I haven't done much with it yet. I do, however, have another one. This is it!!!
Thanks for the lovely comment at Poodo!!
Your poem is so beautiful. And so true. Where has love, compassion, and tenderness gone? Hopefully, I can share a little, cause I am full of love! Visit me sometimes. I would enjoy the company!!!
Lots of happy hugs and love, to you and your family!!!
At 5:32 PM, June 22, 2005,
Anonymous said…
sigh....
At 3:29 PM, June 25, 2005,
Phoenix Tearless said…
Hi Pooza
This is one gr8 blog.
Those love stories were beautiful.
bye
At 12:28 AM, June 28, 2005,
rahulbajaj said…
Amazingly Beautiful Poem...
Have no more words to express praise for your great choice of words and elements...
Keep writing..
Rahul
At 11:36 PM, June 28, 2005,
sona said…
hi pooza
hw r u?
u write amazingly well...reallly liked it....:)
sonika
PS i hv updated my blog...took so mch time
At 1:44 AM, June 29, 2005,
Whats In A Name said…
Hi....
It was lovely.....
Long time no posts BTW????
At 12:37 PM, July 03, 2005,
Anonymous said…
i appreciate ur concern. u dun find happiness in this world. well, i'll tell u something.. the way we percieve the world,depends entirely on us.. if u jsut look at it a bit diferently..
u'll find...
a loving family nearby..
a loving couple ina park..
humanity reflected thru some..
small kiddos playing n enjoying..
etc etc..
it all depends on how u see it. the world is complex.. n it contains it all... evrything is there.. :)..
At 12:38 PM, July 03, 2005,
Anonymous said…
oops... i forgot to write my name. its smilingricha. smilingricha.rediffblogs.com.
At 6:37 PM, July 17, 2005,
Anonymous said…
hey POOZA
nothing new for past few days....
looking forward to some of ur work...
KUSH.
At 3:14 PM, July 24, 2005,
amit said…
pooza, the poem was too gud. i came to ur blog fr the first time. it is a very lovely blog n i feel i wud hv to come here back more often.
At 4:08 PM, July 29, 2005,
Kunal said…
You are one great author or poet (what should i say).
Great posts on PG too..
do drop in
ciao
At 2:48 AM, September 17, 2005,
Darth Midnightmare said…
I've really wanted to ask you this for ages.....
Do you really believe in love the way you describe it? I don't mean to be sarcastic or anything....as in, I really wonder..... Personally, I refuse to accept love as this divine thing which can not be explained logically and which "just happens" and which is "unconditional" and all that......I regard it as the fairytale concept....the "someone somewhere is made for you" thing as per me is something silly......
And yet, in you I find someone totally opposed to my school of thought....at least in the things you write, it comes across that way.....am really intruiged.....do you really think that way? And if you do, is it because of any logical and apparent reasons? Or just a belief that believing in it and expecting it is better than disbelieving and living a life of mundane reality?
Cheers!
MvB
At 4:24 PM, September 18, 2005,
dharmendra surana said…
one of the best blogs i've browsed so far.
your presentability is just fantabulous!
my blog is under construction...will post u soon....
could u plz tell me how do i add music to my blog?.
reply ASAP.
bbye
At 12:53 AM, September 19, 2005,
Sapna Mohata said…
Hi Pooza,
Just came to ur blog frm maloy's blog.
Must compliment you for the amazing work..it's simply great.
-Sapna
At 4:38 AM, November 21, 2005,
Anonymous said…
Really nice poem...
Neelabh...
At 3:42 PM, November 23, 2005,
cYb0rG said…
Hey this is some awesome blog u have... gr8 writin...
At 12:44 PM, November 25, 2005,
Venkat said…
I visited your blog
not yelling and cursing
but I did stop and looked here
What’s wrong?
"so many pics..cluttered with pics"
can be a lot better
Keep the faith I said and walked
--vEnkAt
At 6:49 PM, December 07, 2005,
I Am Sam said…
landed to yoou blog through some links and really moved by your poems. really appreciable and touching. This was really awesome and also liked Dil to chahta hain..
http://canvas-of-life.blogspot.com
At 12:18 PM, December 14, 2005,
Anonymous said…
well pooza you've magical hands..really liked ur art..the poetry was simply brilliant n it gives a wonderful feelin if heard wit the lovely tunes u'v mixed up...one thing dont mind but i can say you've got the ear that listens to ur heart n that makes u a really special ..........................................
At 9:43 PM, December 15, 2005,
Anonymous said…
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At 12:02 AM, February 15, 2007,
ashona111 said…
wow ... 57 comments ... thats intimidating .... anyways this is a very good poem with confident, undeniable and self defined articulates ... too good poetry from literary point of view ... and a pretentious self-involved piece of poetry from the point of view of any sensible/reasonable person/guild ... no doubt that this song has the capability to entice thousands of peoples except those about whom you have mentioned in this master piece ...
you are no less than a award winning intellectual poet who writes a song on a beggar walking on the foot path seating in the balcony of your 5 storeyed apartment ... describing (extra narrating)his misery and pain ... and wins another award by selling that song...
well if you are as good as your blogs then you know what i mean ...
well my judgment can be reasoned for the COMMENTS option in your beautiful and marvelous blog ... and of course the human nature of finding other's faults ...
i found the poem as a description of Hypocrisy ... the other word may be Second Hander / Sadistic ...
the above judgments are based on this single poem only ... i am no body to judge you ... :)
your flirt with english words amuse me ... keep it up :)
At 12:01 AM, April 15, 2007,
Anonymous said…
Hi dude! c
This is test .Sorry.
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Anthony Souls said…
An interesting tale, has some good concepts and imagery- some flow problems, here and there. Found the dialog an enhancement to the poem.
take care,
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